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英語周記800字帶翻譯:我的作家老師

更新時間:2020/2/1 8:19:00  瀏覽量:568  手機版

  時至今日,我印象最深的老師是我現在的語文老師張老師。

  Today, my most impressive teacher is my current Chinese teacher, Mr. Zhang.

  小學時,我的作文寫得好,常被老師當作范文在班里宣讀,所以,進入初中,當聽說我新的語文老師是一位小有名氣的作家并且非常重視學生作文的時候,我激動得要瘋了。我相信,我很快就會獲得張老師的青睞。

  When I was in primary school, my composition was well written and often read out in the class as a model by the teacher. Therefore, when I entered junior high school, I was crazy when I heard that my new Chinese teacher was a little famous writer and attached great importance to students' composition. I believe that I will be favored by Mr. Zhang soon.

  終于,張老師布置作文了,題目是《溫暖的時刻》。我想都沒想,展開作文本,埋下頭,奮筆疾書。我邊寫邊告誡自己:現在是初中生了,不能再像小學生那樣只會用那么幾個好詞好句了,一定要多用些,多得讓張老師不得不對我豎起大拇指。

  Finally, Mr. Zhang arranged the composition, the title is "warm moment". I didn't even think about it. I started my composition, buried my head, and wrote fast. As I wrote, I warned myself: now I am a junior high school student. I can't just use so many words and sentences as a primary school student. I must use more words and sentences, so that Miss Zhang has to give me a thumbs up.

  一個小時后,一篇近兩千字的作文赫然&矗立&在我的作文本上。其他同學呢?一個個還在眉頭緊鎖、痛苦萬分地往作文本上&擠牙膏&。我笑了,我贏定了!

  An hour later, a nearly two thousand word composition "stands" on my composition. What about the other students? One by one is still frowning, painfully to the composition of the "toothpaste squeeze.". I laugh. I'll win!

  幾天后的作文評講課上,張老師將作文本分成兩疊,一疊多,另一疊少。我知道少的那疊一定是好的,其中嘛,肯定有我的!果不其然,張老師從少的那疊里拿起一本作文開始評講,可并不是我的。&沒事,第二本就是我的!&我依然自信滿滿,得意揚揚。

  A few days later in the composition review lecture, Mr. Zhang divided the composition into two stacks, one is more, the other is less. I know that the few stacks must be good, among them, there must be mine! Sure enough, Mr. Zhang picked up a composition from the small pile and began to comment, but it's not mine. "It's OK. The second one is mine!" I'm still confident and proud.

  第二本,第三本好作文都評講完了,其中還有小學時作文遠不如我的同學的作文,可就是沒有我的!

  The second, the third All the good compositions have been commented, among them, the compositions in primary school are far inferior to those of my classmates, but there is no me!

  憤怒讓我失去了理智,我站起來大聲說:&老師,您說,我的作文,哪里不好?&

  Anger made me lose my sense. I stood up and said loudly, "teacher, you said, what's wrong with my composition?"

  張老師很吃驚,立即找出我的作文本,打開,看了看,仿佛很驚喜:&哦,我弄錯了,丁穎同學的作文的確很好!尤其是一些詞句,很優美&

  Mr. Zhang was surprised. He immediately found out my composition book, opened it and looked at it, as if it was a surprise: "Oh, I made a mistake, Ding Ying's composition is really good! Especially some words and sentences, very beautiful... "

  &就是嘛!這才像作家嘛&我想著,剛剛的憤怒早已變成了沾沾自喜。

  "That's it! It's like a writer... " I thought that the anger just now had already turned into complacency.

  下課了,張老師把我叫到辦公室,讓我坐到他的面前,說:&丁穎同學,有一個人很美,但總是頭上戴著一層又一層美麗的帽子,身上穿著一件又一件華貴的衣服,手上的戒指、手鏈數都數不清。你說,這個人還美嗎?&

  After class, Mr. Zhang called me to the office and asked me to sit in front of him. He said: "Ding Ying, one of us is very beautiful, but he always wears beautiful hats one by one, gorgeous clothes one by one, countless rings and bracelets on his hands. Do you think this man is beautiful? "

  &不美,難看死了!&我不假思索地說。

  "It's not beautiful. It's ugly!" I said without thinking.

  &哦,那你看,一篇作文,如果什么內容都沒有而僅僅是一些所謂的好詞好句,它還能是一篇好作文嗎?&

  "Oh, look, can a composition be a good composition if there is nothing but some so-called good words and sentences?"

  &不能。&我突然頓住了,&老師,您&

  "No," I suddenly stopped, "teacher, y

  張老師拿起我的作文本說:&丁穎,你這篇作文的確有很多好詞句,甚至可以說全是好詞句,但是,你的內容呢?你想說什么呢?老師看不出。&張老師輕輕合上作文本,繼續說,&好詞句的確能給作文添彩,但一味追求好詞句就必然導致作文華而不實,空洞無物。丁穎你記著,好作文不一定都得有好詞句,樸素易懂的語句同樣能鑄就好作文。學習和做人其實也一樣&

  Mr. Zhang picked up my composition and said, "Ding Ying, there are many good words and sentences in your composition, even all of them are good words and sentences, but what about your content? What do you want to say? The teacher can't see. " Mr. Zhang closed the composition book gently and continued, "good words and sentences can indeed add color to the composition, but the pursuit of good words and sentences will inevitably lead to the composition being flashy and empty. Ding Ying, remember that good writing doesn't have to have good words and sentences. Simple and easy to understand sentences can also make a good composition. Learning and being human are the same... "

  我滿臉羞愧,為了照顧我的自尊心,課堂上,張老師并沒有計較我的&無知無畏&,反而給了我鼓勵。他教給我的,不僅僅是怎樣寫作文啊!

  My face is full of shame. In order to take care of my self-esteem, in class, Mr. Zhang didn't care about my "ignorance and fearlessness", but encouraged me. What he taught me is not just how to write a composition!

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